Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Is this a good descriptive paragraph?

Words to describe such perfection don’t exist in this imperfect world. Her luminous pale golden skin colour will just capture your eyes. The flawlessness of her skin has many people really jealous. No pimples or dimples are attracted to her. Her small narrow eyes positioned at the right angle on her face with the dark pupils which turn hazel when the sunlight shines towards her. Her lips which show the perfect curve of a smile when she is happy. The daring and playful individuality she has just makes you want to get to know her even better. Just like how a mother treats her new born children in the most careful manner possible, she treats everyone with the most respect and care as possible. She’s the perfect role model for every one.

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